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    Dave Ford
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    Page 31: It is organized by bloodlines, with decision making centered in the Clan Ring, a council of 2030 members, seven of whom serve as officers, or the Inner Ring. – hyphen is missing? should be 20-30?

    #6567
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    Charles
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    Page 19 – box: “She wears an apron made our of snake ribs and a necklace with a snake head.”

    #6568
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    Charles
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    Page 23 – box: “His face been scarred with a lines and dots forming a pattern that resembles the Earth Rune.” – missing ‘has’? extra ‘a’?

    #6569
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    Charles
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    Page 69 – box: “B: Nasal – the dragonewt sense of smell is very well developed and use smell, along with visual displays, for communication.” – missing ‘they’?

    Page 117 – sidebar: “The Chaos Maggot killed the storm god that defended the Earth
    Mother, and Osboropo killed his queen aftershe had given birth to the storm god’s child.”
    1 – the ‘his’ reference is unclear whether it is Osboropo’s queen or the storm god’s queen
    2 – missing space

    Page 121 – box:
    “5. The stone spiral staircase down the Underworld.” – missing ‘to’?
    “At his left, themurderous Trickster reveals that he has killed the son of the Dark King.” – missing space
    “At his right, the Trickster’s liegeman,the storm god Orlanth, reacts with horror and outrage.” – missing space
    “The Dark King himself is outraged at this breach of thesacred laws of hospitality.” – missing space
    “The final panel depicts the World Spider, Arachne Solara as she weaves her web that binds the world andthe otherworld together.” – missing space
    “Beyond that is theVoid.” – missing space

    #6570
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    Martin Helsdon
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    Page 239: ‘Darkspeech’ – should be ‘Darktongue’? See Page 92.

    Page 267: ‘The God Learners called this as the Adelre River’ might be ‘The God Learners called this the Adelre River’ or ‘The God Learners knew this as the Adelre River’.

    #6571
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    Martin Hawley
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    Pg 281 : There is a typo in the title of the boxed section on Kralorela

    #6573
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    Martin Helsdon
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    Detected whilst indexing:

    Page 263: Red Flower Benevolent Society
    Page 263: (three times) Red Flower Benevolent Association
    Page 266, Page 270: Red Flower Society

    Believe the first is correct:
    Page 281 (twice): Chen-ga
    Page 282: Cheng-ga

    Believe the first is correct:
    Page 253 etc: Gorphing River
    Page 242: Gorphin River

    Believe the first is correct:
    Page 242, 253 etc: Lyksos River
    Page 257: Lykos River

    Believe the first is correct (though the title might be capitalized as per the incorrect version):
    Page 265: ShangHsa-may-his-name-be-cursed
    Page 287: Shang-Hsa May-His-Name-Be-Cursed
    No other examples of Shang-Hsa in the document.

    Probably doesn’t matter:
    Page 197, 227, 229, 230: Ygg’s Islands
    Page 140, 256: Ygg’s Isles

    #6575
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    Jamie Norrish
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    Page 12, “the gods tremble with in their presence”; perhaps should be “with fear in”, or just “in”?

    Page 12, “white bear cloak – the skin”; the hyphen should be an em-dash. Since this appears on a number of other pages as well, perhaps it’s a systemic display error or a stylistic choice to use a very narrow character?

    Page 13, ” prehistoric wars — not quite”; the two hyphens should be an em-dash. Since this appears on a number of other pages as well, perhaps it’s a systemic display error or perhaps a stylistic choice?

    Page 313, the description of Hon-eel says that in her left arm she holds a bundle of maize and in her right hand carries a bronze sickle dripping with blood, which is the opposite of what is shown in the picture.

    #6576
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    Harald Smith
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    p.294 The Storm God Orlanth is manifest atop his Great Sacred Mountains, and he is most easily directly spoken with there.
    Perhaps say “most easily and directly reached there”?

    p.88 Hero Wars Begin section: Mostali: The Raising of Tharkarn and Somalz
    p.103 Hero Wars Begin section: Triolini: Eat Big
    These are in Title Case whereas most other Hero Wars sections use Upper Case for elder races. Other boxes seem to only use Title Case, though, so not sure which was intended?

    p.113 Lodril’s Descent: Where he touches, he crashed and burned a great hole.
    Should be touched or landed?

    p.121 Orlanth underwent the Requirement for Proof
    The start of Orlanth is in italics – doesn’t seem needed.

    #6577
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Page 171 Map has (1K Trolls) under Crabtown – no other place mentions the species present, so possibly delete ‘Trolls’ in this case

    #6578
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    Martin Helsdon
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    Page 293: Shargarsh should be Shargash.

    #6580
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Page 313 Has “A bronze sword is laid beside him,symbolizing his violent nature” yet the sword is on top and not at his side.

    #6581
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Is it just me or does anyone else find the depth of the red-orange colour of the Lunar Boxed texts distracting making it harder to read the text itself?

    #6582
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Page 100 has the Keniryan Sea out of alphabetical order in the list of Troll regions of habitation

    #6583
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Page 310 Surmemero near the top lacks a (K) number for the population

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