December 25, 2013 at 8:09 pm #6545
Page 68 : the frame around the picture should not appear I think…
EDIT : Oups, already done, sorry.December 25, 2013 at 11:14 pm #6548
Page 163: Map key has ‘Dwarfs’ not ‘Dwarves’.
Page 184: ‘not the least because of the demonic horses they ride’ – suggest ‘not least because of the demonic horses they ride’.
Page 201: ‘According to artist convention’ should be ‘According to artistic convention’.December 26, 2013 at 1:38 am #6549
Page 234 – Box
Fig. 2: Lhankor Mhy. This god has a very long bear and carries a writing tablet.December 26, 2013 at 4:55 am #6550
Re: Page 163. Thanks, Martin. Good spot. I’ll change the key forthwith. Two years and we’re still discovering errata. …That’s actually a change to all my major maps too. Ouch. 😉December 26, 2013 at 5:03 pm #6552
p121 “10. The feast of the Dark King. At a table sits the Dark King wearing a crown of rulership. At his left, themurderous”
Missing a space before “murderous”.December 26, 2013 at 5:17 pm #6553
following on from Harald’s comment: p121 “14. The final panel depicts the World Spider, Arachne Solara as she weaves her web that binds the world andthe otherworld together.”December 26, 2013 at 5:47 pm #6554
Box: Heroes of Fronela
“At his side, carried in an ornate leather sheat,h he has a curved bronze slashing sword.”December 26, 2013 at 7:08 pm #6557
The Red Emperor is her son and her worship spreads far beyond the bounds of her empire and is very powerful,and includes many lesser deities.
The Red Goddess’ worship is very powerful and spreads far beyond the bounds of her empire, and includes many lesser deities. The Red Emperor is her son.
The Red Goddess’ worship is very powerful and spreads far beyond the bounds of her empire, and includes many lesser deities. [delete text on Red Emperor as superfluous to the crux of the topic, or at least indicate why he is mentioned, e.g. does he lead this powerful worship pantheon?]December 26, 2013 at 7:15 pm #6558
Mesaves on page 40 side bar text (under ‘Art right’)
Mesavos on page 315December 26, 2013 at 7:34 pm #6559
Tidy up the line spacing of the boxed text on page 65December 26, 2013 at 7:44 pm #6560
Maybe bring Garstal Shavetop’s commentary side bar text further up the page to where it connects better to the main body of the text.December 26, 2013 at 7:52 pm #6561Quote:Box: Heroes of Fronela
“At his side, carried in an ornate leather sheat,h he has a curved bronze slashing sword.”
Mea culpa. 8-|December 26, 2013 at 8:21 pm #6562
Chapter “Merfolk” (Page 101) is given the humans title for these species, but all other Elder Races were given their own species title for themselves (e.g. Uz and not Trolls).
Consider changing the chapter title to “Triolini”
Also the term “Triolini” is only used once in that chapter.
If change made then don’t forget to change the Side Chapter title and the ToCDecember 26, 2013 at 9:02 pm #6563
Apologies if anyone else has highlighted these:
Page 9: system.As should be system. As
Page 12: with in shopuld be within
Page 30: decisionmaker should be decision maker
Page 36: reestablished should be re-established
Page 49: themself should be themselves
Page 95: hodge-podge should be hodgepodge
Page 103: monthlong should be month-long
Page 103: nonpregnant should be non-pregnant
Page 117: sculputres should be sculptures
Page 117: aftershe should be after she
Page 117: blossoms.His should be blossoms. His
Page 121: themurderous should be the murderous
Page 121: liegeman,the should be liegeman, the
Page 121: thesacred should be the sacred
Page 121: andthe should be and the
Page 121: theVoid should be the Void
Page 134: Tusunimmi should be Tsunami
Page 153: greeves should be greaves
Page 154: first hand should be first-hand
Page 160: Garrote shoulod be Garrotte
Page 163: impassible should be impassable
Page 201: state.The should be state. The
Page 202: sheat,h should be sheath
Page 219: ocal should be local
Page 237: existence.The should be existence. The
Page 248: should be magnificent
Page 249: Niiads should be Naiads
Page 255: thebase should be the base
Page 260: rerturn should be return
Page 340: passersby should be passers-byDecember 26, 2013 at 11:24 pm #6564
Page 245: Gagark EvilMouth – missing space?
Page 248: a bronze sword and a magificent helmet – magnificent [Am wondering if this is the latest version.]
Page 254: exotic goods such as crystalized shards of gods – crystallized.
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