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  • #6545
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    Gregory Molle
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    Page 68 : the frame around the picture should not appear I think…

    EDIT : Oups, already done, sorry.

    #6548
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    Martin Helsdon
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    Page 163: Map key has ‘Dwarfs’ not ‘Dwarves’.

    Page 184: ‘not the least because of the demonic horses they ride’ – suggest ‘not least because of the demonic horses they ride’.

    Page 201: ‘According to artist convention’ should be ‘According to artistic convention’.

    #6549
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    Charles
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    Page 234 – Box
    Lower Panel
    Fig. 2: Lhankor Mhy. This god has a very long bear and carries a writing tablet.

    #6550
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    Colin Driver
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    Re: Page 163. Thanks, Martin. Good spot. I’ll change the key forthwith. Two years and we’re still discovering errata. …That’s actually a change to all my major maps too. Ouch. 😉

    #6552
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    p121 “10. The feast of the Dark King. At a table sits the Dark King wearing a crown of rulership. At his left, themurderous”
    Missing a space before “murderous”.

    #6553
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    Charles
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    following on from Harald’s comment: p121 “14. The final panel depicts the World Spider, Arachne Solara as she weaves her web that binds the world andthe otherworld together.”

    #6554
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    Charles
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    Page 202
    Box: Heroes of Fronela
    “At his side, carried in an ornate leather sheat,h he has a curved bronze slashing sword.”

    #6557
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Page 39

    Maybe change:
    The Red Emperor is her son and her worship spreads far beyond the bounds of her empire and is very powerful,and includes many lesser deities.
    To:
    The Red Goddess’ worship is very powerful and spreads far beyond the bounds of her empire, and includes many lesser deities. The Red Emperor is her son.
    OR
    The Red Goddess’ worship is very powerful and spreads far beyond the bounds of her empire, and includes many lesser deities. [delete text on Red Emperor as superfluous to the crux of the topic, or at least indicate why he is mentioned, e.g. does he lead this powerful worship pantheon?]

    #6558
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Mesaves on page 40 side bar text (under ‘Art right’)
    but
    Mesavos on page 315

    #6559
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Tidy up the line spacing of the boxed text on page 65

    #6560
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Page 78
    Maybe bring Garstal Shavetop’s commentary side bar text further up the page to where it connects better to the main body of the text.

    #6561
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    Martin Helsdon
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    Quote:
    Box: Heroes of Fronela
    “At his side, carried in an ornate leather sheat,h he has a curved bronze slashing sword.”

    Mea culpa. 8-|

    #6562
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    Jonathan Geere
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    Chapter “Merfolk” (Page 101) is given the humans title for these species, but all other Elder Races were given their own species title for themselves (e.g. Uz and not Trolls).
    Consider changing the chapter title to “Triolini”
    Also the term “Triolini” is only used once in that chapter.
    If change made then don’t forget to change the Side Chapter title and the ToC

    #6563
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    Simon Phipp
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    Apologies if anyone else has highlighted these:

    Page 9: system.As should be system. As
    Page 12: with in shopuld be within
    Page 30: decisionmaker should be decision maker
    Page 36: reestablished should be re-established
    Page 49: themself should be themselves
    Page 95: hodge-podge should be hodgepodge
    Page 103: monthlong should be month-long
    Page 103: nonpregnant should be non-pregnant
    Page 117: sculputres should be sculptures
    Page 117: aftershe should be after she
    Page 117: blossoms.His should be blossoms. His
    Page 121: themurderous should be the murderous
    Page 121: liegeman,the should be liegeman, the
    Page 121: thesacred should be the sacred
    Page 121: andthe should be and the
    Page 121: theVoid should be the Void
    Page 134: Tusunimmi should be Tsunami
    Page 153: greeves should be greaves
    Page 154: first hand should be first-hand
    Page 160: Garrote shoulod be Garrotte
    Page 163: impassible should be impassable
    Page 201: state.The should be state. The
    Page 202: sheat,h should be sheath
    Page 219: ocal should be local
    Page 237: existence.The should be existence. The
    Page 248: should be magnificent
    Page 249: Niiads should be Naiads
    Page 255: thebase should be the base
    Page 260: rerturn should be return
    Page 340: passersby should be passers-by

    #6564
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    Martin Helsdon
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    Page 245: Gagark EvilMouth – missing space?
    Page 248: a bronze sword and a magificent helmet – magnificent [Am wondering if this is the latest version.]
    Page 254: exotic goods such as crystalized shards of gods – crystallized.

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