February 22, 2014 at 3:27 pm #6953
Before S-M gets to it with a much needed hyphen, on page 592:
The rest I’ll leave to the pro.February 22, 2014 at 4:11 pm #6954
Nice! Yes, everyone please beat me to these because I still dread Fonrit. The system is rigorous but slow.February 22, 2014 at 5:31 pm #6955
Page 362. Maybe change Ryzel: to Ryzel Hills: to mirror what is on the map
Page 392 Side panel text has:
Dragonewts of Ormsland…Its dragonewts are wilder, more irrational, and less friendly towards humans than those of Dragon Pass.
Yet in the main section under
Ormsland:…and their behavior is often less erratic and irrational than “true dragonewts.”
So which is it, more or less irrational? I would assume more erratic if page 74 is to be believed?
Page 590 (within the Kothar chapter): …called the Land of Seven Rhinoceros, four of which are found nowhere else and one of which, the Trihorn, is found only in Tarien. So, just checking that only six of the seven rhinos are still extant?February 22, 2014 at 9:15 pm #6957
Page 145 has a God Learner plate with Korgatsu owning the Beast Rune, yet Page 281 has The God Learners equated it [Korgatsu] with their Hykim. So they would of put Hykim down rather than the Karlorelan name for it?
I’ll get my coat.February 22, 2014 at 11:11 pm #6958
Hyphenquest: Final Act
Everything okay in Pamaltela until p. 538 (goldcrowned) and then 540 (sevenconqueror), 541 (roundtopped).
FONRIT: nonslaves (544, you guys might have changed your mind on this one), handpicked and highlypaid (also 544), statesupported (546), selfstyled and nearforgotten (547), citystates (Abesh, 549), merking (553, you guys might have flipped on this), nonalcoholic (560), maledominated, nonhuman, knocktogethers (566), fairskinned (567
JOLAR: in addition to previous, search turns up grasstype and righthand (570), faroff and SeesatNight (582)
— Molibasku is out of alpha order
KOTHAR: a few already caught by Mr Geere and other parties, plus multiyear (584), yearround (593)
MASLO: new search reveals semiindependent and doublehulled (594), “house destroying” has split up (596), green- and blueskinned (599) nonhuman (601), jungledwelling, saucerlike, dockworkers (602) in addition to previous
TARIEN: previous search missed monsterinhabited (604), farranging and crocodileinfested (609)
UMATHELA: add selfstyled (616), another merking and “three quarters” (622), fullyqualified (631), antiAfadjanni (635)
— “three-headed” in Varchep? (635)
— for the insanely nitpicky the “J” in the Jarasan Gulf entry never got its italic (630)February 23, 2014 at 10:30 am #6959
Page 405. Pasos should be in bold?
Page 405: I am not sure if the sentence below reads properly:
A thriving port, its position on the northwest corner of the peninsula makes it a perfect crossing point for merchants of the Neliomi Sea shipping wares southward, and from the entire Middle Sea sending them north.
I found it easier to read as:
A thriving port, its position on the northwest corner of the peninsula makes it a perfect crossing point for Neliomi Sea’s merchants to ship wares southward, and the entire Middle Sea to send them north.February 23, 2014 at 12:15 pm #6960
page 415 Palace of Pentacles but Palace of the Pentacle on the mapFebruary 23, 2014 at 1:05 pm #6962
Page 427. “They are often seen in Teshnos.”, appears to be missing a word.
Maybe “They are often seen trading in Teshnos.”February 23, 2014 at 1:54 pm #6963
Amazonwarleader should be Amazon war-leader (space and hyphen?)February 23, 2014 at 2:07 pm #6964
Page 283. Fanzai: not listed in alphabetical order under Places of InterestFebruary 23, 2014 at 4:51 pm #6969
truestone on page 437 but capitalised Truestone on page 463, is this compatible?February 23, 2014 at 7:50 pm #6973
Should the side bar text on page 512 have a Title?February 23, 2014 at 8:01 pm #6974
Page 515 welltrained should be well trained or well-trained
Page 515 The only noticeable breach is the dwarves city of Torfang,
Maybe instead be: The only noticeable breach is the dwarf city of Torfang,
Page 515 Side text: to deflect weapons, and so on.They have elaborate
Should be: to deflect weapons, and so on.[space]They have elaborateFebruary 24, 2014 at 4:05 pm #6975
Voyans are listed on the population list on page 584 as humans, but page 591 seems to indicate that they are non-humans.February 24, 2014 at 7:53 pm #6978
p373 middle column, 2nd paragraph down, “neither good not evil” should be “neither good nor evil”
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